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Your local community center wants to add some new workshops or programs for children， which of the following do you think would be most beneficial for children’s development？
A. Art craft workshop
B. Technology workshop
C. Athletic programs
首先，我们可以通过审题确定关键词与限定词。题目中的关键词为local community center(小区设施)，限定词为：be most beneficial(对孩子有利的)。通过审题我们发现这道题目难度并不高，我们需要把限定词套用到关键词当中，即对孩子有利的小区设施。
本题范文采用了迷你小故事(个人经历)的写法，这与我们与智能训练 TASK1 部分相同，起因就是小学的时候肥胖，然后遭到同学们嘲笑，最后大学的时候打篮球瘦下来了。因此，我得出了这样的感悟，即身体健康、健身习惯最重要，其次，如果早点有喜欢的设施那可能就早早瘦下来了。
1. Art craft workshop
①It is easier for children to cultivate their talent in art at a younger stage.
② It is important to develop their own taste in art.
2. Technology workshop
① Expand their outlook by offering various of advanced technology.
② It’s easier for children to cultivate their talent in technology at a younger stage.
3. Athletic programs
① Working out regularly can benefit children to keep in fit and healthy， like strengthen muscles and build up cardiovascular system.
② It can cultivate some valuable traits such as persistence and patience.
1) Among all three workshops and programs， I believe that the art craft workshop will be the most influential for children’s development for two reasons. First， it is usually easier for children to cultivate their talent in art at a younger stage since most children are extremely creative when they are little. Such creativity is critical for learning and appreciating art and could gradually decrease as time goes by. Therefore， it is the best to offer such an opportunity to utilize their advantages. Also， it is important to be able to develop their own taste in art. Art is like a language and with it， children will be able to express and perceive emotions in a different way.
2) Among all three workshops and programs， I believe that the technology workshop will be the most influential for children’s development for two reasons. First， when children are little， they remain high curiosity to everything around them and have strong aspiration to knowledge. Therefore， it will be the best to offer them such source to help them with learning. Secondly， if they develop an interest in science and technology in an early stage， they are more likely to keep that interest when they grow up and they might choose to major in or even pursue a career in it.
3) Among all three workshops and programs， I believe that the athletic programs will be the most influential for children’s development for three reasons. First， exercising is important for one’s physical wellness and athletic programs will help develop the habit of working out regularly. Plus， athletic programs can help cultivate a lot of valuable traits such as persistence and patience which will benefit children in their future lives. Thirdly， athletic programs， especially team sports， will help children establish intimate relationship with peers while letting them know how to work in a team.
4) Personally， I would say athletic programs will be most helpful for kid. Athletic programs help to release children’s tension and depression that they get from both their life and study. Apart from that， doing sports activities is a very good way to keep healthy and stay in good shape. It helps children to build up some muscles and become athletic. I， it is also good for their cardio vascular system. Lastly， kids will learn the importance of cooperation in an athletic program since team members need to work closely with each other to win the game.